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Monday, November 23, 2009
Ada orang bertanya tentang penyusunan bab yang dapat menarik perhatian pembaca untuk mengikuti karya yang ditulis. Bagi aku, lebih baik memahami makna plot itu terlebih dahulu. Ini kerana ramai yang beranggapan yang plot ialah jalan cerita semata-mata.
Jika seorang penulis menulis sebegini; 'Raja Moses meninggal, kemudian Permaisuri Sarah meninggal'; tiada plot yang ditemui dalam penceritaan ini. Tetapi jika penulis itu; 'Raja Moses meninggal, kemudian Permaisuri Sarah meninggal kerana membunuh diri dek terlalu sedih dan tidak sanggup tinggal bersendirian tanpa raja yang dicintainya,' penulis itu telah membentuk plot bagi ceritanya itu.
Plot ialah rentetan peristiwa yang berdasarkan sebab dan akibat, yang menjelaskan 'mengapa' suatu itu terjadi dalam cerita. Plot juga dapat diertikan sebagai jalinan peristiwa yang berhubungan antara satu sama lain hingga dapat dilihat pertaliannya. Pemahaman terhadap plot menarik pembaca kepada kehidupan watak dan membantu pembaca memahami pilihan yang dibuat oleh watak.
Bahagian plot terdiri daripada eksposisi iaitu pendedahan cerita dan watak iaitu menjadi maklumat yang diperlukan. Watak-watak akan menghadapi permasalahan atau konflik. Konflik selalunya akan menjadi pemangkin kepada satu kesan atau mungkin akan memulakan satu konflik yang lebih besar. Impak ini adalah klimak yang akan memberikan titik peralihan kepada cerita iaitu apabila watak cuba menyelesai konflik tersebut. Usaha-usaha yang dilakukan oleh watak dan hasil daripada usahanya menjadi peleraian bagi menutup cerita itu.
Berbalik kepada pertanyaan hamba Allah SWT tersebut, jawapan aku kepadanya plot tidak selalunya berbentuk lurus. Mungkin ada yang bermula dengan peleraian, baru hendak memperkenalkan eksposisi dan kemudiannya konflik. Terpulang kepada kreativiti penulis untuk menyusun plot karyanya.
Tetapi kita perlu pula melihat kepada tabiat membaca pembaca. Kebanyakan pembaca sudah terbiasa dengan plot yang konvesional iaitu yang lurus; ekposisi - konflik - (klinaks) - peleraian. Tidak ramai yang suka membaca cerita yang perlu mengerah fikiran mereka untuk memahami apa yang dipersembahkan oleh penulis. Plot yang diolah lari daripada plot konvensional ini memerlukan pembaca meneliti apa yang dibaca sebelum dapat memahami apa yang diceritakan. Aku masih tidak pasti adakah pembaca mahu meluangkan sejenak untuk meneliti apa yang dibaca jika plot diolah dalam bentuk non-linear atau mereka akan menutup novel dan berkata, "Aku tak faham langsung cerita ini."
Tetapi sebenarnya, untuk menarik pembaca, bukan setakat penyusunan plot yang memainkan peranan. Ada banyak aspek lain yang membantu seperti teknik penceritaan seperti imbas muka, imbas kembali, suspens, pemerian, gaya bahasa (personafikasi, metafora, simile, paradoks, perulangan, hiperbola, inversi), unsur bunyi (aliterasi, asonansi, konsonansi) dan lain-lain lagi.
Dan karya yang baik mempunyai semua elemen plot di dalamnya.
  2 screencap yang berlainan tetapi mempunyai pertalian (anime Last Exile) Kalau aku boleh menghantar dua keping gambar ini kepada hamba Allah SWT tersebut, aku akan meminta dia menghasilkan satu cerita ringkas mengikut kreativiti sendiri yang mempunyai plot berdasarkan 2 keping screencap ini. Latihan minda dan kreativiti!
Friday, November 20, 2009
Satu lagi pertanyaan yang sampai kepada aku ialah 'Apakah watak protagonis dan watak dinamik?' Tetapi dalam entri ini, aku hanya menjawab mengenai watak dinamik kerana semua orang tahu apakah itu watak protagonis.
Watak dinamik ialah bergerak atau berubah bukan sahaja daripada segi fizikal malah juga pemikirannya. Dalam salah satu rujukan aku, watak dinamik ialah watak yang mengalami perubahan mengikuti perkembangan cerita.
Dalam mengenali samada watak itu adalah watak dinamik atau tidak, pembaca perlu peka terhadap watak itu; cari perubahan yang berlaku. Perubahan fizikal dapat dikesan dengan mudah tetapi perubahan pemikiran memerlukan usaha pemahaman yang teliti. Seorang pembaca boleh meneliti watak melalui trait fizikal, dialog, tindakan, pandangan dan reaksi watak itu.
Watak utama boleh menjadi watak yang statik sepanjang jalan cerita manakala watak sampingan boleh menjadi watak yang dinamik. Dalam hal ini, jika watak protagonis menjadi watak antagonis, maka watak itu adalah watak dinamik.
Dan aku sendiri lebih tertarik kepada watak yang dinamik walaupun ia bukan watak utama kerana ia lebih memberikan pelbagai perspektif pandangan kepada pembaca. Mungkin kerana itu, aku sentiasa memastikan watak utama dalam karya aku adalah watak dinamik, bukan sekadar daripada segi fizikal tetapi juga pandangan dan pemikirannya.

Dan kedinamikan watak ini yang menjadi penamat kebanyakan karya aku seperti yang dapat ditemui dalam novel Cinta Semanis di Hati, Cinta di Hati, Andai Ada Cinta, Luka Sekeping Hati dan juga Tiada Lagi Cinta.
Tetapi kadang-kadang aku menggaru kepala juga sebab ada pembaca yang akan bertanya, apakah penamat novel aku. Ini bermakna mereka tidak sedar perubahan watak, daripada berfikiran negatif atau bersikap pasif kepada berfikiran positif dan bersikap aktif adalah penamat bagi karya aku.
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Pertanyaan daripada seorang hamba Allah SWT, 'adakah kisah yang terpapar di ruangan Di Celah-celah Kehidupan boleh dijadikan bahan dalam penulisan?'
Menulis kisah orang ialah menulis sebuah biografi. Dan tidak salah menulis kisah orang lain. Sebuah kehidupan itu sendirinya merupakan sebuah karya dan sering memberikan ilham kepada mereka yang mencari inspirasi untuk menulisnya kembali, samada menulis dengan sebenar-benar fakta atau ditambah dengan imaginasi berdasarkan kreativiti sendiri. Jadinya, tidak salah menulis kisah orang yang dilihat, dibaca atau didengar.
Tetapi perlu diingati yang orang yang bercerita dalam ruangan itu mungkin tidak mahu kisah dirinya diangkat menjadi sebuah biografi walaupun mereka mahu bercerita di akhbar. Matlamat mereka bercerita di akhbar pun bukan untuk mendapat untung tetapi hanya untuk memberi pendapat atau mendapatkan pendapat bagi kemelut yang mereka hadapi. Alih-alih, ada orang sedang membuat untung daripada kisah mereka. Dan yang lebih penting, hormati kisah mereka.
Untuk itu, gunakanlah kreativiti untuk mengubah realiti itu menjadi sebuah cerita imaginasi yang diinspirasikan daripada kisah orang lain. Oleh itu, tiada hati yang akan terasa.
Dan perlu juga diiingati, yang kadang-kadang kisah orang itu adalah kisah yang sama dengan puluhan atau ribuan orang lain. Kisah rumah tangga yang hancur dek orang ketiga, kisah kecurangan suami atau kekasih, kisah kena kahwin paksa dan lain-lain adalah kisah yang bukan hanya berlaku kepada Aisha, tetapi juga kepada Riza, Cecilia dan ramai lagi. Dan ramai penulis (wanita) banyak menghasilkan karya seperti ini. Dan tidak mustahil, ada pembaca yang telah membaca dua buah novel yang bercerita tentang kahwin paksa kerana tangkap basah, kemudiannya muncul orang ketiga dalam hidup suami tetapi akhirnya tetap bahagia bersama, walhal ceritanya ditulis oleh penulis yang berlainan.
Ini adalah hakikat yang terpaksa diakui. Jadi, gunakanlah kreativiti dalam berimaginasi untuk menghasilkan sebuah karya yang masih bercerita akan perkara yang sama tetapi tidak memberikan rasa yang sama seperti karya orang lain.
Pendek kata, tidak mengapa menulis kisah orang. Yang penting, jangan sampai kena saman oleh orang yang anda jadikan kisahnya sebagai bahan karya penulisan itu kelak atas alasan menulis kisah mereka tanpa kebenaran!
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Fanfiction : Kissing and Jealousy
Dua buah fanfiction yang ditulis oleh seseorang yang memperkenalkan dirinya sebagai 'Just A Wanderer' yang membuatkan aku tersenyum. Kebanyakan fanfiction anime Kyou Kara Maou lebih banyak berkisar kepada watak Wolfram dan tunangnya. Tetapi penulis ini menulis mengenai dua orang abang Wolfram (Big Brother Gwendal dan Little Big Brother Conrad) dengan mengambil latar ketika mereka kanak-kanak dan remaja. Ceritanya membuatkan aku tersenyum sepanjang hari apabila terkenangkannya kembali.
Kissing and Jealousy
That morning, the sun shone warmly and the breeze blew gently. Cheri had just entered her office when light footsteps that she knew very well echoed throughout the hallway. Cheri smiled to herself as they were approaching the office. In a mere second, a messy little brown head poked into the room. "Mother?" a little boy with hazel eyes spoke hastily. Cheri gave a small chuckle. "Come in, Conrad." The brunette boy took off his hold on the doorknob, then dashed towards his mother who caught him immediately and swung the boy mid air. "What is it, Conrad? What made you pant like this?" Cheri ruffled his hair affectionately. Her second son was simply adorable, she mused inwardly. Conrad was panting. His chest heaved heavily. Cheri noted that something seemed troubling the chubby kid. Frown marred the little face. Cheri made a mental note to reprimand Gwendal not to frown too much. Lately, Conrad's liking was imitating Gwendal. Just like any younger siblings do, Conrad looked up much to his older brother. Cheri couldn't imagine that her second child would grow up to have a serious feature too. "Mother," the prince said thoughtfully. "Doing something that isn't nice to others is wrong, isn't it?" "Well..." Cheri strove to grope what Conrad meant. Sometimes it's not easy to just wild guess a child's words. "Yes, you're right, darling." "So," Conrad continued. He tried to form words into sentences. He might be older than any human kid but he still looked three in human age. "It's not right if we do something to others and make them cry?" "You're absolutely smart, honey. It's bad if we force others to do things without their consent. Why did you ask?" Cheri sensed something wrong with the questions. "Because Anissina is crying," spontaneously Conrad answered. "Why is she crying?" "Gwendal kissed her." Cheri was taken aback. "Pardon me, Conrad?" She'd never imagined that her oldest son would kiss a girl anytime soon. Gwendal was still a baby, she faintly wailed. She had once taken Gwendal to a human territory and one of the citizens had said that he looked eight. "It's true, Mother," Conrad firmly convinced his mother. His dark brown head nodded vigorously. "Gwendal kissed Anissina, that's why she's crying. And Gunter is crying too." Cheri paled considerably. She might be a carefree woman but she concerned much when it came to her precious boys. Why did Gunter cry too? That thought crossed Cheri's minds. "Did Gwendal also kiss Gunter?" cautiously Cheri voiced her thought. Oh my, what would I tell Lord von Christ and Lord von Kalbernikoff? Hopefully they wouldn't be mad. What a perfect incident to start the day! "Gunter's jealous," Conrad answered plainly as if it had been the most obvious matter in the world. Now it's Cheri's turn to gawk. Children nowadays were mature in no time. Amazing! Conrad even knew the word 'jealous'. Moreover, Gwendal already attained the courage to kiss a girl, she added bitterly. "Where are they now?" Conrad detached himself from Cheri's hug. "C'mon, Mother, I'll show you to them. They're in the back yard." Cheri was dragged. She trotted along with Conrad who excitedly led the way. There, Cheri saw two little boys. One of them had a serious looking face, that was her oldest son. Gwendal stood and wore a scowl on his face. He crossed his arms in front of his chest. Not far from him, a young boy with lavender hair and eyes was crouching. The boy was sobbing pitifully. He tried to wipe his tears but they kept rolling down. Staring down at him made Gwendal sulk. "Stop crying, Gunter," the indigo eyed boy half commanded. He looked perplexed. "You're not a little kid anymore. Aren't you ashamed?" "But... but..." Gunter's voice was muffled. "I've told you its fine." Cheri's heart sank. What was fine? She walked slowly towards the boys. Geez, my sons grew up too fast. "But you're mad at me," Gunter peeked through his fingers. "I'm not." "You're not?" "Gunter!" Gunter's sobs subsided. His small hands wiped away the remaining tears on his face. Even though his eyes were swollen and puffy, he still looked as adorable as an angel in heaven. Gwendal exhaled heavily. He didn't frown again. Sometimes he thought that his fellow, Gunter von Christ, the cutest kid in the whole kingdom, was a cry baby. And this cry baby always tailed him everywhere and every time. "See, Mother," Conrad exclaimed triumphantly. "Gwendal kissed Anissina. It made Gunter cry because he was jealous. It means that Gunter likes Anissina, right?" Sharply, Gwendal turned his head to his brother. He never glared his scary stare to Conrad but today was the exception. Despite of the thundering turmoil she endured due to her son's conduct, Cheri couldn't help but chuckled. "Is that true, Gwen?" "Conrad was just making up stories, Mother," Gwendal remarked heatedly. He was vexed, especially knowing that Conrad didn't seem frightened under his icy glare. "But I saw you kiss her," Conrad argued stubbornly. "Then both of you fell to the ground. Then Anissina cried. Then Gunter started to cry too." "That's not what exactly happened," Gwendal argued back. "You're mean, Gwendal, " the brunette continued accusing his brother. "Mother said that forcing other kids is bad. And you made Anissina and Gunter cry. You're naughty." Gwendal truly cared for Conrad even though his baby brother was annoying, was too curious of whatever the older boy doing and tailed him just like Gunter did. But being addressed 'naughty' was his limit. "Only a naughty boy tells lies to his mother. It's you," Gwendal's little face remained impassive but the tone of his voice conveyed his rage. "I'm not," the younger boy curtly refuted. "I'm a good boy. I never make anyone cry." "You're exaggerating it." "Boys," Cheri promptly interrupted. She bent down a little so that her eyes in the same level with the boys'. "What happened exactly?" her question stopped the bickering between the brothers. "It's my fault," Gunter answered involuntarily. He already stood up but his head hung in nervous fashion. "I pushed Gwendal till he tripped over Anissina. It made him kiss her. That's why she cried." Cheri ruffled Gunter's head soothingly. "And why did you cry too?" Gunter's lips began to tremble. "I felt guilty. I'm sorry." "There there, sweetie," Cheri tried to appease the lilac boy. "I didn't kiss her, Mother," Gwendal objected immediately. His stoic little face faltered. Panic crossed his facial expression. "Our cheeks brushed. That's all." Cheri was relieved. At least, his older son didn't do something indecent towards the other noble kids. Her beautiful visage broke into smile. "And Gunter didn't cry because he's jealous, did he?" Gunter's face was swept by surprise before it turned a beet red. "N-no, Your Majesty," Gunter stuttered in bewilderment. "I wasn't jealous. I've told you I was guilty." "So, Gunter wasn't jealous and my precious Gwen only kissed Anissina on the cheek," Cheri clarified before started to walk back to her office. "Mother, I didn't kiss her," Gwendal protested wholeheartedly. His mother only wove her hand and smiled. Gwendal turned his head to his younger brother. "Conrad, don't make up stories again," he grimaced darkly.
Monday, November 16, 2009
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